Brooklyn's story!!! LINK This story is about a girl who has been nice to people like giving money to people and everything but then she finds out that they are just using her for her money. I hope you enjoy reading it!!!!
Hello! My name is Lile. I come from Park Estate school. I love how you made the story interesting and funny. But I saw that you didn't end the story very well because it didn't really feel like the end and there was a sentence that didn't make sense so make sure you check your writing before you post. okay bye bye see you on your next blog post bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
Hi Brooklyn. i really liked your story,maybe next time you could finish the story bye bye heres my blog http://wpsaahanam.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHello! My name is Lile. I come from Park Estate school.
ReplyDeleteI love how you made the story interesting and funny.
But I saw that you didn't end the story very well because it didn't really feel like the end and there was a sentence that didn't make sense so make sure you check your writing before you post.
okay bye bye see you on your next blog post bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
Hello My name is Boasa i came From park estate school i love how you made this story interesting
ReplyDeleteand funny Bye!!!!!!!!
Hi my name maile i came park estate to i love how you made the story interesting and funny and cool by
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