SPY FOX STORY!!!!!!!!!

                                                   Hey my fellow bloggers!!!

During the week I was rewriting a film about a Fox that is a spy, So basically his name is Spy Fox! My writing had a choice they could either write the next adventure of Spy fox or tell the story in writing. I chose to rewrite the story and add detail into it. My story was a bout a Fox that saves other people/animals and his wife was one of them i'm not going to keep you bored and keep reading this description. Also you guys can give me some feedback on this if you would like to. Anyways  here is my writing!!

STORY 

‘WOW! Great hit Spy Fox! But i'm still tied up!” Said Lily

Once upon a time there lived a Fox his name was Spy fox he lived with his girlfriend Lily. They lived in a small town in a small house they were

Sad because they had no children and the wanted to have children but they thought it would cost to much money any other than that they were spy’s Lily wasn’t really a spy but Spy Fox counted her as one. They had friends the were penguins one name was Jack,Max and Sarah they were a happy family.

During the afternoon Max and Sarah wanted to teach there little one how to swim but he was scared to jump in the water but the Dad said “ go on jump in you’ll enjoy” So he did and then BANG!!! A lazer hit the rock and the whole family fell into the ocean and they didn’t come back up! So then spy fox left home to go and save the penguins.When they got to the the villain's place he crawled through a vent and he forgot that he did and just left it open left it like that

One of the workers saw and dropped everything in his hands and ran to tell the boss but when he got to the gate Spy Fox came and BANG! Spy Fox cme and knocked him to the ground and he boss heard a bang turned around and saw Spy Fox! “ well well well we meet again spy fox i’m hoping you're having a great day “ said the villain “ I was but then you came and wrecked everything up “ said Spy Fox”  “well I hope you and Lily had a great dinner” The villain said while he pressed the button on his chair and Spy Fox was wondering why he said that but then he heard a voice that sounded like Lily’s voice and he turned around and it was her she was about to get eaten by the machine.

Spy Fox was surrounded by the workers but he knew how to handle them. So he pointed somewhere and they all looked and Spy Fox knocked them out one by one and then he cut a rope to let his wife down, but when she dropped down she was surrounded to but then she knocked then out to! Spy Fox was surprised but then he got hit by a pole but he got back up and shakes his head and then BANG! He hit the last worker on the head! Lily ran to him to give him a hug for saving her life!

They quickly get to the car before the boss would come and finish him but little did the know that before the started to fight he went upstair to hide. Spy fox and Lily quickly ran to the car Spy fox set the car to plane mode and lily said “ now where were we?” But then the place blew up and they went back home!!!!!!

Hope you liked it BYE! BYE!